This doesn't look wrong at all

Everybody is drawing Alicorn Twilight art and i'm just sitting here drawing sh*t from my fanfic.

Based on this scene.

"Thanks for saving us!" Yelled one of the Digimon. "No problem at all!" Said Coronamon. "I thought humans were all really bad people, but you guys proved us wrong!" Said the Blue Digimon. The girls laughed at these kids. "Am Apple Bloom!"
"I'm Sweetie Belle!" "And i'm Scootaloo!" The three of them said. The Digimon chanted. "I'm DemiVeemon!" "I'm Koromon!" "And i'm Gigimon!"
Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle picked up Demiveemon and Gigimon and both yelled out. "AAAAAWWWW!! There so cute!!" Scootaloo rolled her eyes. The girls admiring how adorable these Digimon were didn't notice a small old man like Digimon walking up to the girls.
"Uh Apple Bloom?"

Before she could take noticed the Digimon hit her on the head with hi's cane. Causing Apple Bloom to fall over to the ground with a lot of pain in her head. "Elder Jijimon!? What are you doing!?" "Getting rid of these human scum!" He yelled. "What in tarnation!?" Yelled Apple Bloom rubbing a bump on her head. "Hey we just saved you'r lives! Were the good guys!" Yelled Scootaloo.